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People now days send text massages more frequently than they talk the phone. What are the reasons for this trend ? Do the advantages of texting out weigh the disadvantages ?

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Technology is bringing more comfort and efficiency to people nowadays.
This
 means that every individual is trying to get everything as quick and efficient as possible.
This
 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of sending
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messages
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massages
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messages
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 by
phone
 and cellphone usage. I would like to start off by saying that
text
the
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is the
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 best way to convey our message to the receiver because it will remain
in
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on
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 your
phone
 until you have the time to check your
phone
 so that if the receiver is busy at the moment, he will not miss the
information
.
Moreover
,
text
messages
 do not involve emotions which is easier to express ourselves without fear or nervousness and
text
messages
also
 offer the
information
 clearly in case
that
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you need an address
this
 will remain clearly
in
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on
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 your
phone
, and you do not need to call back to ask again for the
information
.
However
, some disadvantages of
text
messages
 are that they are not appropriate in some cases,
such
 as emergencies or unexpected events.
Therefore
, people can use the
phone
 and call
the
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other individual to let them know about these particular cases which
is
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are
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 faster than
text
messages
. In conclusion, a
lot
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 people prefer to send
messages
 because they find them more convenient and faster than a call as well as emotions are not involved which is significantly important to convey
a certain types
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a certain type
certain types
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 of
messages
.
However
, calls are
also
 relevant when we are in front of a rush situation, as we ensure that
we
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our
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information
 was received.
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