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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

#society #rules #laws #individuals #function
There is no denying
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the fact that freedom is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of thought opine that freedom if not
be
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regulated will make
the
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society unstable and can not function well,
mean while
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 the others possess the opposite thoughts. I suppose the disadvantages when
people
 are given too
many authorities
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 will completely outweigh the advantages as there are always
people
 who
themselves
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without
laws
 and regulations can be harmful to others.
Initially
, the world as a whole and humanity
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in particular
 is essentially bad, governments serve as a tool to cope with the detrimental impact and to protect the inferiors, restraining the power of the ones who are the
dominance
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 and are likely to exploit the underclass. In historical recordings, there were so many
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 , but under the contemporaneous government’s control, they can not extort and be rampant. A factory regarding
chemical
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 in Thanh Hoa Viet Nam called Ke Xau has been sentenced for disposing tons of
chemical
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 into
sea
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causes
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 the death of millions of fish, forcing their workers to work more than twelve hours a day due to the local’s lawlessness.
On the other hand
, but for the appropriate control, it would lead to bloody wars because
law
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 is justice, pointing out good and bad things. Without
laws
,
people
 have to fight for their rights. It is obvious that
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crimes
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 rate would be increasing tremendously and the number of consequences
such
 as violence and the hunger of robbed
people
 would follow the absence of
laws
. To illustrate, Thanh Hoa is the city of Viet Nam where
laws
 are not applied and
people
 are free to do what they want. As a consequence, there
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huge gap between
rich
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 and poor classes,
people
 sleep under bridges and have a very poor quality of life. In conclusion, I fully agree that rules and
laws
 are essential for the function of a country and have to be strictly followed and obliged for every. citizen of it.
This
 is because if the
laws
 are not respected
then
 humanity degrades.
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