Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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the fact that freedom is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of thought opine that freedom if not

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regulated will make

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society unstable and can not function well,

mean while

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the others possess the opposite thoughts. I suppose the disadvantages when

people

are given too

many authorities

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will completely outweigh the advantages as there are always

people

who

themselves

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without

laws

and regulations can be harmful to others.

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, the world as a whole and humanity

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is essentially bad, governments serve as a tool to cope with the detrimental impact and to protect the inferiors, restraining the power of the ones who are the

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and are likely to exploit the underclass. In historical recordings, there were so many

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, but under the contemporaneous government’s control, they can not extort and be rampant. A factory regarding

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in Thanh Hoa Viet Nam called Ke Xau has been sentenced for disposing tons of

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into

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the death of millions of fish, forcing their workers to work more than twelve hours a day due to the local’s lawlessness.

On the other hand

, but for the appropriate control, it would lead to bloody wars because

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is justice, pointing out good and bad things. Without

laws

,

people

have to fight for their rights. It is obvious that

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rate would be increasing tremendously and the number of consequences

such

as violence and the hunger of robbed

people

would follow the absence of

laws

. To illustrate, Thanh Hoa is the city of Viet Nam where

laws

are not applied and

people

are free to do what they want. As a consequence, there

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huge gap between

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and poor classes,

people

sleep under bridges and have a very poor quality of life. In conclusion, I fully agree that rules and

laws

are essential for the function of a country and have to be strictly followed and obliged for every. citizen of it.

This

is because if the

laws

are not respected

then

humanity degrades.