You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Technology has been growing up very fast these days due to many reasons. Sharing of scientifical
data
provides many benefits for this
development. However
, many people claim that some valuable documents should not be shared freely with others. In my opinion, this
is unethical that people should share
their data
for new discoveries. This
essay discusses both views and thus
will lead to a reasonable solution with examples.
On the one hand, as a regards sharing experiences
, is a very important rule of scientific research. However
, as long as they keep a secret, it may change to useless data
rather than valuable and it never points out important developments. For instance
, making valuable researches have to start with collecting data
. Even though every piece of data
is important, a secret one may clog the scientific revolution. So, it should be unearthed before scientific research to enhance data
quality and provability.
On the other hand
, some countries or societies never want to share
their experiences
with others. Because they paid a lot of money and spent time which is not affordable. Thus
, they never want to change their information. However
, the experience was built on other experiences
which are taken from other resources. Moreover
, it may wider impact than thought. For instance
, every country does not have nuclear power plants due to secret information. Thus
many countries suffer from energy needs and may occur many problems.
In conclusion, sharing information is very important to start new research.Moreover
, this
is a reason why we have to change or share
our experiences
. If we want to develop humanity, we should share
everything.Submitted by haturk10 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite