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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowadays, there are many tourists who are interested to see new places where reaching them is not easy for them
for example
 Sahara desert or the Antarctic. the adventure can make them happy and they know there are many hazards on their
way
 despite
this
 they want to have a different experience. There are many advantages to these trips. as we can familiar with a new culture and civilization
this
 wants to help us that we can close to people who are living in around the
world
,
although
, today we can watch people around the
world
 through tv or other media. when we can travel to these areas we can find a new perception of their life and we can learn a lot of things about their life condition ,
for instance
, nowadays there are many visitors around the
world
 who are looking forward to seeing ancient objects and they want to know about history and tradition related to any place in the
world
 and for these reasons they tolerate any difficulty in their
way
.
In contrast
, the majority of travellers are aware many of serious
problems
 on their
way
. in fact, the hazard is an important part of travel. professional tourists want to collect information about their destination to reduce these risks
such
 as information about medical services or hygiene or wild animal as well as something like that. In conclusion, tourists throughout the
world
 want to face new happened and
problems
 can not be an obstacle in their
way
. not only
they
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 want to learn how to solve different
problems
 in their
way
 but
also
 they want to experience new
problems
 and
this
 will give them a sense of power.
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