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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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tourism is an advantage or disadvantage for
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society. In my personal
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 the benefits of tourism are much more enriching for countries than its disadvantages.
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, it is reasonable to assume that nowadays
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 huge amount of jobs are
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tourism
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 means that a wide range of people are involved in
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employers
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that
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 incomes
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depends
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depend
 on it. One clear example is India, where
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 of the covid rules over the past few years the economy
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 drastically dropped due to the fact that was impossible to travel.
Secondly
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 of the cities and their attraction
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represent
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represent
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 massive income for the countries. For
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istance
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, the city of Rome has a lot of museums and
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 activities due to the fact that every week of the year thousands of tourists come to visit the city and
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 means thousands of euros goes to the city's
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administration
.
On the other hand
, there are a lot of
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negative effects of the
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tourism
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administration
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provides
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 to control
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system
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, the historical or natural places can be sharply
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. Taking into consideration all points above, I truly
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 that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks. All we need to broaden the positive effects is to
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establish
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establish
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 great control plan.
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