completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.On the other hand other people think that getting experiences and developing soft skills is more important .Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The college diploma is the fruit of studying

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years. It is often argued that

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piece of paper will land a

person

to

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a satisfying

job

.

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, other people

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that experience combined with talents is more beneficial. In my view, earning a degree in college is necessary since it the

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first

qualification that the company will look for. It will serve as

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proof of knowledge of the applicant while

skills

and experience can be viewed subjectively, those

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not guarantee a

person

's performance. When applying for a

job

, the

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thing to secure

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the requirements. Most of the time, the hiring team will prefer those

job

-seekers who successfully finished tertiary education. Those people will be given the priority to be interviewed

first

based on their credentials.

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is a vacancy

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teaching

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post, the

admisnistrators

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administrator

administrators

will

then

look for someone who finished a degree in education to make sure that they will select the most qualified. The diploma will summarize all the qualifications. By evaluating the resume,

job

-hunters do not have the chance to show

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skills

.

Moreover

,

skills

and talents can be evaluated based on a

person

's preferences. Someone might say that the talent is exceptional but another evaluator may

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disagree

.

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, staying

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the same line of work and doing the same task every single day is not

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proof that someone is passionate

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his or her

job

.

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, a

person

may boost that he is

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experienced

experineced

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experienced

on the

job

by measuring the years of service even if he has no interest

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at all; the paycheck that comes

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every

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end of the month is the greatest motivation.

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, the nature of work and the environment of every establishment

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differs

differ

diffes

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differ

from one another. There is no assurance that the talent that was acquired from previous employment will be useful. To conclude, being a graduate of a certain university means meeting the

quallifications

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qualifications

a company is looking for. It will open more opportunities to be part of a huge and well-known company

also

, managers can be subjective with

skills

when doing

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