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what is the causes and effects of water pollution? what are the solutions?

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Nowadays , pollution of
water
 is increasing rapidly rather than in the past, due to some reason and
also
 drinking
water
 is scarce and getting polluted.
This
 essay illustrates the reason and effect of it.
First
 of all , currently , thousands of litres of
water
 are westingon wash cars or some other things , which we do not need without it we can wash it ,
For example
 , a survey suggests they 9 to 12 litre of
water
 west in the car station and they did not recycle it and left them open ,
consequently
 , that increase the particular diseases
then
 it affects our body.
Moreover
 , a number of companies released the
water
 flow into rivers or sea ,
that is
 the reason only 1% of the
water
 is for drinking ,
such
 as the UAE established a
water
 plant , which works to make useful
water
.
Furthermore
 , numerous people throw garbage in the
water
 flow or sea at the travelling place ,
For instance
 , many popular rivers are been dirty , due to human behaviour.
On the other hand
 , if we cannot take care of it , we will not get drinking drink for our
Next
 generation ,
For example
 , nowadays , many species of birds are becoming extinct , owing to the hunting of it , as well as it will become in
water
 ,
as a result
 , there will not be enough rain on the earth for us to drink.
Secondly
 , due to
water
 pollution , a number of diseases will spread in the world ,
therefore
 many humans will kill by the illness ,
For instance
 , many people have skin problems and it could come because of
water
 pollution,
consequently
 , it will disturb our quiet life. In conclusion , not only the state but the people
also
 have to come forward and encourage others to save
water
 and sealed the companies, which spread the deterioration.
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