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Several languages are in dangerous of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Despite the fact that some uncommon
languages
 are becoming extinct day by day due to the minority usage by
people
 in the
region
 of the
world
, some communities believe that authorities must investigate the field of surviving mentioned
languages
,
also
, other parts of
people
 think that it is not a proper field for investigation. I definitely agree with fans of spending money on traditional
languages
. On the one hand, in my opinion, rare
languages
 which are spoken in some specific parts of the
world
 should be saved in various ways and even allocate funds to it for future generations because these types of
languages
 indicate the history and available cultures of our
country
.
Moreover
, scarce
languages
 are part of the identity of the related regions. To explain more, it can be said that no one in the
world
 does not want to lose his or her identity due to the importance of former branches in his or her family or in that state.
For instance
, if a
region
 is well-known for its
languages
 and accents in the
world
, the authorities of the relevant
country
 and
region
 have to pay attention to
this
 language by expanding public money,
otherwise
, the reputation of the mentioned
region
 will be destroyed in time.
On the other hand
,
in contrast
 to the
last
 view, some ideologies disagree with assign of budgets for saving any models of
languages
 and accents.
Firstly
, they believe that they have more important issues in their
region
 that can be solved with the allocated budget.
Secondly
, the absence of a special and scarce language in some regions can be effective on the views of
people
.
For example
, 90 per cent of
people
 speak Persian in Iran, and only 10 per cent of
people
 speak other
languages
such
 as Turkish, Arabic, Gilaki, and Lori.
Thus
, the majority of
people
 who utilize main
languages
 lead to their lack of understanding of saving other
languages
.
Finally
, it can be said that these kinds of
people
 can respect to traditional
languages
 of their
country
 for protecting from national history. In conclusion,
although
, some communities think that investigation in the field of keeping infrequent
languages
 can not be a logical way for the
country
 politicians, I strongly believe that we should pay attention to uncommon
languages
 and governments should spend logical money to survive them.
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