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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. Your talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Taghavi I am Mohammad Mohamadi,if you remember,I was sitting
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 to you on the plane during the trip from Canada to Iran on 21 of May. At the time,we were talking about the restaurants that you owned.At the end of the trip,you offered me a job,and I am writing to remind you of your offer that you want me to
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 at your restaurants. I worked as a supply chain manager in an international company in Iran.
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,I have had
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 experience as a warehouse manager since I was working for a restaurant in Canada.
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,if it would be possible,I would like to
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 in one of the positions I mentioned above.
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 these,I enjoy working as a team
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 with my colleagues which can definitely benefit me during
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,I think,I will be suitable for
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,because I have been knowing the cultures of the two countries which might be helpful for communication with people in your restaurant.I can
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 full-time or part-time.
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,I am interested in teaching young people who are introduced as apprentices. I am looking forward to hearing back from you, Yours Sincerely, Mohammad Mohammadi

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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