Many Offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle these problems.

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is noticeable that many

offenders

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commit more crimes after serving the

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punishments

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. İn my opinion ,

punishments

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which needs can'

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be given properly by

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, and

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crime

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commit

rates

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increase gradually . Many

offenders

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who still continue to commit

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crime

crimes

srime

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crimes

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problem if

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will provided seminars about crimes to

offenders

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or

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if

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governments

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will prepare jails properly

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offenders

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be given properly by

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, and

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crime

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commit

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increase gradually . Many countries struggle with these problems anymore .

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, a man will become

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guilty when he committed

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crime

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a crime

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and afterwards,

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the government

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punish

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for guilty . Another point to consider is that

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provide solutions properly for

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. Because many

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still

crime

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commit and causes much trouble

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as death ,

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thieves

thiefness

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and thiefness

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,

offenders

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can be saved if

government

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the government

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will set up seminars about crimes , and

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crime

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commit

rates

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will decrease in countries

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have

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the

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apply

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offenders

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. İn conclusion ,

punishments

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which needs can'

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be given properly by

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, and causes

crime

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commit

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increase gradually . İn my opinion ,

governments

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should

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apply

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provide solutions properly for

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,

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and

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commit

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rates

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will decrease in countries

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have

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offenders

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.