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In many part of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In many nations around the globe, several
parents
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 are interested in their
kids
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. In comparison, the past has more
freedom
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. I will discuss the advantages of
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 positive issue throughout
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 essay. From the social standpoint, some
children
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 have nature independently and their
parents
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 and
schools
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 can have more effect to develop their social manner because of the
freedom
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 with control from their background of them,
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, the following paragraph will examine the reasons behind
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 trend and recommend some practical ways to research to how
parents
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 can improve the independent their
kids
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.
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,
children
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 can be more responsive to their family and independent when they grow and it affects their mental health to determine how they behave in society and other social communities.
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 and tutors have a vital role in
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 program. The obvious method that individuals can find out about the background of their
children
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 and improve their behaviour to be respectful and responsible in the future,
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, the
schools
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 and institutions have a vital role to help
parents
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 to control
kids
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 for their
freedom
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 with some workshops about these social activities.
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, they can talk with teachers in simple terms,
parents
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 can ask their
children
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 about responsibilities and their reactions.
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, the government should help the
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 with more budget to improve
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 as their
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 to have more workshops and good classes. To summarize, while there are some arguments about
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 and the
kids
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, I profoundly believe that the benefits of
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 for
children
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 and their future independently.
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schools
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,
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, and government should have a vital role in
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 issue.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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