Buying products online is common nowadays, Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

digital ,era internet has changed the way of shopping, nowadays people are buying online

instead

of going to a physical marketplace. for that ,reason a large number of sellers are shifting their businesses from local stores to online. In

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essay, we will discuss why I feel that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of online shopping.

First

of all, the main disadvantage of online shopping is that a lot of local vendors are losing their customers. Nowadays not only

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javelina

are buying online but

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old-age customers are using smartphones and they are shopping online, for

this

reason, a lot of local vendors are getting out of business. In fact, a report from a local newspaper published that in 2021 that 30% of the sellers shut off their local stores and shifted online. probing

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to conception, I would like to add one more drawback which is online fraud. Even though these digital companies add in their terms and conditions and privacy policy pages that they are going to deliver original products they are delivering some fake products.

for instance

, one of my friends paid RS-7500/- for Nike shoes online but when he got the shoes he found out that those shoes were

first

copies and not genuine pieces. after a lot of ,

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struggle he got a refund but ,

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still

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it was a very hectic job.

On the other hand

, if we talk about the advantages of the shop online the main advantage is

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the online deals. Indeed, these online companies give a huge

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deals

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online which these local sellers can never be provided.

for example

,

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Diwali, Amazon and Flipkart gave 50% discount on every product,

in

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shipping was

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free. they

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made a

made

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made

3 billion dollar revenue

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that festival season which is pretty huge.

Moreover

, Digital shopping is less time-consuming because you don't have to physically

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go to

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and waste time. in order to buy

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you just need

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with an internet connection and you can buy the product very easily. In conclusion, even though online shopping has some drawbacks, but still all the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. these online companies should at least think about the small vendors while giving

discount

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so they can

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make money.