Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right or wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Teachers

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and

educator

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have

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difficult

task

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tasks

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to do as they are supposed to teach

kids

values and

furthermore

academic topics.

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essay will discuss these two points of

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and

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it will provide my personal opinion. I would like to start off by saying that

firstly

,

schools

are a place where

kids

are able to learn

principals

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and academic subjects

in addition

to educational subjects. Even though,

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are not the only responsible

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teaching

kids

how to behave well in public or

different

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in different

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places as

this

might come from the household.

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, when I was a kid, my mom taught me how to eat properly and how to greet people when entering

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a new place, whereas my teacher was

also

teaching me to say “good morning” which is

also

part of what my mom imposed to me as a toddler.

For instance

, teachers are not always responsible to educate children about manners and good behaviours. In fact, part of the education is coming from the house and the other part from

schools

.

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, when the teachers see

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bad behaviour they will inform the parents respectively, and they will correct the kid

accordingly

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so that

kids

will not suffer from rejection or bad habits when they are adults.

Schools

should be equipped with

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psychologists

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and trained

personal

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to provide conferences to parents and

kids

when

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behaviour is escalating to another level. In conclusion, in today’s

civilization

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we need to provide good education and manners to our

kids

along with the

schools

.

However

,

this

does not mean that the entire responsibility would be only for the school but the household as well.