Long distant flights uses more fuel than cars and brings pollution to the environment. We should discourage non-essential flight rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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people

that long distant

flights

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more

fuel

than

cars

and

brings

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pollution

to the

environment

. We should discourage non-essential

flight

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rather than

limit

the

use

of

cars

. I completely agree with the

opinion

. İn my

opinion

, long distant

flights

affect

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the

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environment

badly due to

use

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the use

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more

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fuel

, and

therefore

flight

limit

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can be discouraged by

governments

or

limit

that executed

cars

can be eliminated by

governments

, afterwards

people

will

begin

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prefer

cars

rather than planes for

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flights

.

Firstly

,

governments

execute

limit

the

use

of

cars

, and

therefore

many

people

who wanna go

to

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far generally prefer

to

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flights

. Unfortunately ,

flights

cause much trouble

such

as

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environmental

enviromental

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environmental

problems . İn my

opinion

, we and

governments

discourage non-essential

flights

, and

thus

environmental problems can decline . A

plane

that

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prepare

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to fly need

to

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approximately 1500

liter

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fuel

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and

this

fuel

participant to

air

in a gas way while the

plane

fly

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in the

air

.

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,

this

fuel

that participated

to

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air

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takes place much trouble for our

environment

.

For instance

, trees or flowers affect badly due to

fuel

that participates

to

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air

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Another point to consider is that

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limit

the

use

of

cars

can be eliminated by

governments

. Because

cars

save more

fuel

than planes in the best way , and

thus

pollution

can decline in the world and

also

, these

flights

affect the economy of

governments

due to their high-cost and

also

,

governments

take

fuel

in an

expensived

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expensive

way from

Arabican

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Arabian

countries

such

as Abu Dhabi and Qatar .

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, the economy of countries

affect

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badly .

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, a man wanna go to anywhere

for

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travel and the man prefer to

plane

. Because

plane

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the plane

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is less cost than

cars

, and

thus

air

pollution

takes place in the world .

Pollution

can be eliminated if

law

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the law

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will eliminate maximum the

use

of

cars

. İn conclusion ,

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long-distance

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long distance

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flights

affect badly our

environment

and

pollution

takes place in the world . İn my

opinion

, corruption can be eliminated if

governments

will eliminate

limit

the

use

of

cars

, and

thus

many

people

will

begin

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prefer to

cars

for their job or their travel

. .

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