Long distant flights uses more fuel than cars and brings pollution to the environment. We should discourage non-essential flight rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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İt is considered by
people
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that long distant
flights
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us
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use
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more
fuel
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than
cars
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and
brings
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bring
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pollution
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to the
environment
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. We should discourage non-essential
flight
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flights
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rather than
limit
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the
use
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of
cars
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. I completely agree with the
opinion
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. İn my
opinion
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, long distant
flights
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affect
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environment
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badly due to
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use
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the use
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more
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of more
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fuel
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, and
therefore
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flight
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limit
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can be discouraged by
governments
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or
limit
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that executed
cars
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can be eliminated by
governments
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, afterwards
people
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will
begin
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prefer
cars
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rather than planes for
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long-distance
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long - distance
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long-distance
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flights
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.
Firstly
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,
governments
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execute
limit
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the
use
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of
cars
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, and
therefore
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many
people
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who wanna go
to
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apply
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far generally prefer
to
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flights
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. Unfortunately ,
flights
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cause much trouble
such
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as
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environmental
enviromental
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environmental
problems . İn my
opinion
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, we and
governments
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discourage non-essential
flights
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, and
thus
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environmental problems can decline . A
plane
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that
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is prepare
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prepare
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to fly need
to
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approximately 1500
liter
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fuel
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and
this
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fuel
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participant to
air
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in a gas way while the
plane
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fly
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in the
air
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.
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,
this
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fuel
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that participated
to
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in
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air
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takes place much trouble for our
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.
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, trees or flowers affect badly due to
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that participates
to
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air
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Another point to consider is that
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limit
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the
use
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of
cars
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can be eliminated by
governments
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. Because
cars
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save more
fuel
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than planes in the best way , and
thus
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pollution
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can decline in the world and
also
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, these
flights
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affect the economy of
governments
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due to their high-cost and
also
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,
governments
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take
fuel
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in an
expensived
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expensive
way from
Arabican
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Arabian
countries
such
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as Abu Dhabi and Qatar .
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, the economy of countries
affect
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badly .
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, a man wanna go to anywhere
for
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travel and the man prefer to
plane
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. Because
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plane
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the plane
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is less cost than
cars
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, and
thus
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air
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pollution
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takes place in the world .
Pollution
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can be eliminated if
law
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the law
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will eliminate maximum the
use
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of
cars
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. İn conclusion ,
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long distance
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long-distance
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flights
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affect badly our
environment
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and
pollution
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takes place in the world . İn my
opinion
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, corruption can be eliminated if
governments
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will eliminate
limit
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the
use
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of
cars
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, and
thus
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many
people
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will
begin
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prefer to
cars
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for their job or their travel
. .
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  • public transportation
  • electric vehicles
  • environmental impact
  • non-essential travel
  • economic benefits
  • tourism industry
  • global trade
  • sustainable alternatives
  • carbon offsets
  • renewable energy
  • climate change
  • eco-friendly
  • environmental awareness
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