Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?
Underdeveloped
countries
should be assisted by rich Use synonyms
countries
with humanitarian support when natural Use synonyms
phenomenon
occur. Fix the agreement mistake
phenomena
This
essay strongly agrees with Linking Words
this
statement. Developing Linking Words
countries
not only have limited resources but Use synonyms
also
natural disasters are man-made.
Poorer Linking Words
countries
have a shortage of resources. They do not have the financial means nor the human resources to overcome a natural phenomenon. Use synonyms
This
means they have limited Linking Words
safe-shelters
built in their Correct your spelling
safe shelters
countries
to facilitate during a naturally occurring disaster and are limited to Use synonyms
spend
money on rescuing people. Wrong verb form
spending
For example
, during a Tsunami in the Philippines buildings were destroyed. There were no Linking Words
safe-shelters
for the Correct your spelling
safe shelters
filipinos
and they were trapped for days in their houses and apartments. Many people died because there was a shortage of excavators, cranes, and trucks. Change the capitalization
Filipinos
This
delayed the rescue.
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Secondly
, natural disasters are man-made. There is an increasing number of environmental crises because of the pollution humans have created. Recent research has concluded that factories in developed Linking Words
countries
are producing high amounts of CO2 from their abundant factories. Use synonyms
This
is released into our ecosystem, suddenly rising the temperature and Linking Words
thus
, causing global warming. Most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
naturally occurring catastrophes are caused by sudden shifts in the environment. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, developed Linking Words
countries
should take responsibility Use synonyms
towards
poorer Change preposition
for
countries
.
To conclude, I believe the plentiful nation-state should aid underdeveloped states with humanitarian relief. Natural catastrophes are human-made and underprivileged nations require help from wealthier Use synonyms
countries
.Use synonyms
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