IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The system used for rubbish / garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neibhours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neigbours suggest what should be done about the problems

#system #rubbish #garbage #collection #area #neibhours #council #neigbours
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Dear Sir/Madam,
This
Linking Words
 is Sam Curran from Park Street, India. I am writing
this
Linking Words
 letter to inform you about the faulty system of
rubbish
Use synonyms
/
garbage
Use synonyms
 collection. As far as I am concerned, the authorities should collect the
rubbish
Use synonyms
 or
garbage
Use synonyms
 at night
time
Use synonyms
. But it is observed that
this
Linking Words
 system has not been followed properly since
last
Linking Words
 month by the assigned employees of the local council.
Although
Linking Words
 we have been urging them, again and again, to comply with the system, there has been no response found so far from the responsible authority. As you know more than 30000 citizens have been living in
this
Linking Words
 commercially important place. But it is difficult for them to move into surrounding areas because of the stink as the
rubbish
Use synonyms
 or
garbage
Use synonyms
 has been collected in day
time
Use synonyms
 even though it was advised to collect the
garbage
Use synonyms
 at night
time
Use synonyms
 after 11 pm.
For
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
 reason, school and office-going people have been suffering from health-related problems.
However
Linking Words
, I would like to suggest collecting all the
rubbish
Use synonyms
 or
garbage
Use synonyms
 at night
time
Use synonyms
instead
Linking Words
 of day
time
Use synonyms
.
Additionally
Linking Words
, you may arrange a day-long training program for your employees to educate them on the total procedure
as well as
Linking Words
 behaviour with people. I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding
this
Linking Words
 matter. Yours faithfully, James Cook
Submitted by faisalmahamood on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear logical structure from introduction to conclusion. Structural elements like clear paragraphing and signposting phrases can enhance readability and flow.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of cohesive devices beyond basic conjunctions (e.g., furthermore, consequently, in addition) to link ideas within and across paragraphs smoothly.
task achievement
Aim to fully address all parts of the task. Provide detailed descriptions, explanations, and specific suggestions related to the issue presented.
task achievement
While the writing tone is generally suitable, strive for a tone that consistently aligns with the formal requirements of a letter to an authority. This includes avoiding informal language and ensuring politeness and respect throughout.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: