In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volium of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this problem and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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An issue that exists around the world is heavy
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I will not only explain the factors why
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congestion occurs but
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discuss how
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obstacle can be easily resolved.
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plan for
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management by the government is the root cause of trafficking. By explaining, it will be clear to you I hope. All government and non-government offices, all educational institutions, private and multinational business farms and organizations, and all other local shops open and close at the same
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, all the people of various professions, students, teachers, as well as guardians, come to the streets at a similar
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, thereby causing
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congestion.
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, Dhaka is a city of 10
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people, and except
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elderly and housewives, more or less 9
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dwellers set out for their respective places at around 9 a.
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why all the streets abound with a total of two
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private and public vehicles, though the streets have a capacity of holding half a
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vehicles. The proper distribution of
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for each organization can be a way of curbing
traffic
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congestion. Schools, colleges, and universities open at 8 a.
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. and end at 1 p.
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., while all the offices must
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at 11 a.
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. Japan,
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, reduced twice as much
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in 2021 as it was in the past. By adopting
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strategy, Japan,
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, reduced twice as much
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in 2021 as it had in the past. According to me, with an aim to mitigate
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, the government in collaboration with different political, social and cultural organisations should
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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