People who live in large cities face a range problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled.

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is the main issue for everyone. As it

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day by day citizens have to

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related to health that make their life span

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of vehicles and observed

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as they do not get enough space for living with their whole family including parents and children.

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living in a big city. But

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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People who live in large cities face a range problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled.

Your opinion

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