People who live in large cities face a range problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled.
In
this
modern era, individuals who moved toward metropolitan cities have to face
a number of difficulties
. In upcoming
paragraphs, I will discuss Correct article usage
the upcoming
problems
and how to overcome these problems
.
To commence with, person
who Add an article
the person
a person
live
in a locality has to Replace the word
lives
Face
so many problems
. In big cities
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,cities
pollution
is the main issue for everyone. As it rise
day by day citizens have to Change the verb form
rises
face
difficulties
related to health that make their life span shot
. Correct your spelling
short
For example
, A survey was conducted last
year by ‘The Times of India’. It can be clearly seen that person
who Fix the agreement mistake
people
live
in big Change the verb form
lives
town
suffer from Fix the agreement mistake
towns
heart related
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heart-related
problems
that caused
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are caused
increase
in Add an article
an increase
the increase
number
of vehicles and observed Change the article
a number
the number
pollution
. Moreover
, persons
have to Replace the word
people
face
difficulties
in accommodations such
as they do not get enough space for living with their whole family including parents and children.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions related to the difficulties
which were discussed in the above paragraph. However
, pollution
is a major problem. marshes use more and more private cars which take pollution
at a high-level so government should aware the public to use public transport for short distances. It helps to reduce the level of contaminated air in Add an article
the surrounding
surrounding
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surroundings
Although
, it also
helps people to stay fit and healthy as we all know “Health is wealth”. Furthermore
, person
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a person
the person
have
to live in a nuclear family.
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has
this
, here we have so many problems
of
living in a big city. But Change preposition
with
pollution
and health are main
issues. Reduction in Correct article usage
the main
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
more
private transport can help to overcome Correct quantifier usage
apply
this
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