People who live in large cities face a range problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face, and how can these problems be tackled.

In
this
modern era, individuals who moved toward metropolitan cities have to
face
a number of
difficulties
. In
upcoming
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problems
and how to overcome these
problems
. To commence with,
person
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the person
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who
live
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in a locality has to
Face
so many
problems
. In big
cities
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pollution
is the main issue for everyone. As it
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day by day citizens have to
face
difficulties
related to health that make their life span
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short
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.
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, A survey was conducted
last
year by ‘The Times of India’. It can be clearly seen that
person
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people
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who
live
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in big
town
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suffer from
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problems
that
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by
increase
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an increase
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in
number
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of vehicles and observed
pollution
.
Moreover
,
persons
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have to
face
difficulties
in accommodations
such
as they do not get enough space for living with their whole family including parents and children.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions related to the
difficulties
which were discussed in the above paragraph.
However
,
pollution
is a major problem. marshes use more and more private cars which take
pollution
at a high-level so government should aware the public to use public transport for short distances. It helps to reduce the level of contaminated air in
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.
Although
, it
also
helps people to stay fit and healthy as we all know “Health is wealth”.
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,
person
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have
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to live in a nuclear family. To conclude
this
, here we have so many
problems
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living in a big city. But
pollution
and health are
main
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issues. Reduction in
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of
more
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private transport can help to overcome
this
mess.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • metropolis
  • commute
  • public transportation
  • gridlock
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • expensive housing
  • exorbitant prices
  • work-life balance
  • recreation areas
  • parks and gardens
  • criminal activities
  • security measures
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