Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patient do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly.

The doctors
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that
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over- aged citizens do
The doctors Suggest that over- aged citizens do
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exercise
daily but some patient have not
follow
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exercises
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exercise
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in
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routine
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the routine
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.
This
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to discuss the benefits as well as causes of
workout
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.
Firstly
,
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the
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young age
people
do
exercise
in
daily
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their daily
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routine because they know that health is wealth. If you do physical jerks you, do not need doctors. Beautiful keep your
keep your
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body fit and fine and it
also
improve
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your mental skills, more attention
on
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work and
then
would feel
laziness
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in
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whole
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a whole
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day. The main thing is that
the
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older
people
needs
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more
exercise
because the diet plan
are
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not well
in
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this
age, so most probably
chance
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of heart attack and liver disease and liver diseases. They should make a timetable and must follow it.
on the other hand
, many humans do not follow the daily routine due to
busy
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being busy
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in their
occupation
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occupations
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. workout is very important in our
time table
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. many
people
know that
exercise
is good for fitness.
although
they cannot have sufficient time for
morning
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a morning
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walk and they are trapping of health problems
such
as they do not
have
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proper growth of body and mental problems.
in
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a survey found that only 40% of
people
do
exercise
and have fit and
remaining
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the remaining
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persons are suffered from many diseases. our government should encourage
the
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human beings by organising special events
on
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every weekend in every city. Yoga
the
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best
exercise
for our health.
Conclusion
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,
people
are less active and they need to motivate to do
exercise
. as causes of
workout
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a workout
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