The doctors
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that Correct word choice
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over- aged citizens do
The doctors Suggest that over- aged citizens do Remove the redundancy
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exercise
daily but some patient have not
followChange the verb form
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exercisesFix the agreement mistake
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in Change preposition
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routineAdd an article
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.
This
essay
IntendsFix capitalization
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to discuss the benefits as well as causes of
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Firstly
,
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theCorrect article usage
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young age
people
do
exercise
in
dailyCorrect pronoun usage
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routine because they know that health is wealth. If you do physical jerks you, do not need doctors. Beautiful keep your
keep your Remove the redundancy
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body fit and fine and it
also
improveChange the verb form
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your mental skills, more attention
onChange preposition
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work and
then
would feel
lazinessReplace the word
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inChange preposition
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wholeAdd an article
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day. The main thing is that
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older
people
needsChange the verb form
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more
exercise
because the diet plan
areChange the verb form
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not well
inChange preposition
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this
age, so most probably
chanceAdd an article
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of heart attack and liver disease and liver diseases. They should make a timetable and must follow it.
on the other hand
, many humans do not follow the daily routine due to
busyAdd a missing verb
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in their
occupationFix the agreement mistake
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. workout is very important in our
time tableCorrect your spelling
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. many
people
know that
exercise
is good for fitness.
although
they cannot have sufficient time for
morningAdd an article
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walk and they are trapping of health problems
such
as they do not
have Unnecessary verb
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proper growth of body and mental problems.
in Change preposition
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a survey found that only 40% of
people
do
exercise
and have fit and
remainingCorrect article usage
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persons are suffered from many diseases. our government should encourage
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human beings by organising special events
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every weekend in every city. Yoga
theAdd a missing verb
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best
exercise
for our health.
ConclusionChange preposition
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,
people
are less active and they need to motivate to do
exercise
. as causes of
workoutCorrect article usage
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.