A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend some mone

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to my opinion about your decision that you decided to spend

money

as a sponsor for our

children

's sports team or to pay the

money

for holding a concert in the open air. In our neighbourhood,we never had a sponsor to support our

children

who lived in

this

area.So,with your offer

children

can play together in their leisure time.

Moreover

this

idea can help

children

who are suffering from health problems. I have been living in the area,since I was young,and have never seen a concert,so you cannot imagine how much

this

will affect our spirits to improve our mental health.

Therefore

,not only, you can earn

money

from the concert, but

also

you can extend your business on other aspects of the job.

However

, I would prefer to donate to a sports team owing to prevent wasting

money

.I believe,

this

choice is the best way for

children

who are willing to do physical activities. I appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion, Yours faithfully, Mohammad

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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