Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities should accept equal

a

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apply

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couple

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of

man

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men

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and

woman

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women

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students in each subject or

field

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.

Accordingly

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,a

couple

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of

reason

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reasons

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in

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for

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agreement and disagreement will be explored in

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essay. I am of the opinion that acceptance in colleges should

based

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be based

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on

do

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merit not giving equal opportunities

for

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to

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everyone. By way of illustration

a

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apply

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some

of

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apply

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individuals

to be

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are

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interested in

engineering

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the engineering

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field

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whereas a

couple

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of nursing

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field

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fields

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but

this

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limitation caused that individual doesn’t go to their aim and eventually,they

field

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their abandoned and lose their motivation

this

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hardship impressive in job prospects so impose every subject on the person hasn’t interested in a fundamental flaw. It is asserted that

instead

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of gender discrimination universities should students and applicants

with

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apply

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pay attention to interest accepting because has

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women

woman

womans

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women

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that

applicant

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apply

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police and public safety or even fire diplomats

field

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.

In

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addition

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a

couple

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of

man

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men

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has that

to

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apply

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cooking is interested and should each enter into the desired

field

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based on competence. In conclusion, I express the idea that

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this

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these

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equal opportunities not only benefit but adverse ,the best way is choice based on worthy that

lead

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leads

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to pursue education,founding suitable job in upcoming,the person doesn’t have to study about something that one is not interested in.