Some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Entertainers,

such

as

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actors,sportsmen,singers,

influencers

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are becoming increasingly popular in several parts of the world.A few

people

believe that

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this

part

of the society receives a higher income compared to the other working sectors.Considering the workload and the stress,

people

are of the view that Doctors,Nurses,

Firefighters

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should be paid significantly greater income than

the

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entertainers considering the stress,workload and

the

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dedication to become a

part

of the crucial team.In

this

essay,I will

firstly

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express my views regarding

this

issue, followed by the

varieties

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variety

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of

job

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jobs

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that certainly should require

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higher pay. The entertainment sector is known for

their

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fame and name so they are receiving a

considerable

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greater income compared to others.They spend a huge

part

of their time on screens,either for shows,

gaming

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or gaming

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events,to host ceremonies so they become famous in a place.When

this

happens,

firstly

,they gain popularity in the area which allows them to be a suitable person for advocation,education and a figure for inspiration.

In addition

,their

well known

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status engages a wide and

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variety of

audience

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audiences

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.Take Bhutan

for example

.Actors get a minimum of Ngultrum 5000 for a

3 day

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shoot,which is almost double

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what others receive.

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Therefore

Therfore

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Therefore

,I agree that

this

sector has a higher pay scale than most workers. I strongly hold the opinion that

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professionals

such

as Doctors,Nurses,Soldiers,

Fire-fighters

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Firefighters

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,

Life guards

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should be paid more as they contribute to a crucial

part

of

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society.If a disaster occurs,without these set of professionals

people

would be in between life and death.Not only during disasters but in

everyday

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the everyday

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scenario

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,they remain an important team.With adequate training and support,they can become entertainers but not vice versa. The sad reality nowadays

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is that

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famous

people

are paid more than the ones who are working tirelessly

such

as health workers and social workers.