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It will be better to have wide use of driverless car for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Nowadays, due to advanced in technology almost every work is done by robots and machines. Some
people
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 believe that both individuals and the community will benefit from
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 application of driverless cars. In my opinion, I strongly agree with
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 statement and I think that it
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 has some drawbacks , I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs.
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 with,
people
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 can save valuable time along with they do not need to hire drivers for their
vehicles
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,
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 is because due to the electronics and robotics systems cars can run by themselves and they do not need any drivers to drive their
vehicles
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.
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, the Netherland, one of the countries in Europe has a large
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 of autonomous
vehicles
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 followed by the USA and Japan, which helps the public to save valuable time and money.
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, it reduces the chances of accidents due to the setup of robotics systems by humans helps to reduce the collision on the road and can control
vehicles
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 more efficiently.
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,
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 trend has some disadvantages.
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, an enormous
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 of drivers will be jobless due to
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 technology and it will create a difficult situation for the jobless
people
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 to run their households.
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, in Hong Kong due to the arrival of driverless cars, a large
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 of
people
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 lost their job.
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, it will affect negatively the government,
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 is because the authorities need to find the work and money for them . To conclude, I strongly agree with
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 statement because it saves
people
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 time and reduces the chances of accidents which will affect positively
people
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.
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, due to
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 application enormous
number
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 of
people
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 lose their job and protecting the job position is
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 crucial because it will create a difficult situation for both individuals and the community.
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