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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with?

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There is a saying that
schools
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 need to be more entertaining, and others think that their only purpose is to educate. I partly agree that
schools
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 need to be more entertaining, and
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 essay will explain why. People used to think that
students
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 only need study at
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.
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, they ignore the educational effects of
entertainment
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 which comes from
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. When
students
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 have
entertainment
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 in
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, they are not only for fun but
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 learning a range of skills.
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, the teacher will organise a game and assign
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 to a team, which is an efficient way to teach teamwork to
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.
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, some recreational activities in
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 can stimulate
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' creativity. There are some
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 in China; that will organise a create snowman activities in winter. When
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 attend
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 activity, they will use their brains to imagine what kind of snowman are they going to build. In
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 process,
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 reduce stress and improve their creativity.
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, excessive
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 in
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 can
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 cause problems. If there is too much
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 in
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;
students
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 would like to associate
school
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 with play. Namely, they will pay more attention on play
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 of studying in
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.
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, it will have some negative effects on their academic performance.
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, many
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 get together to play games, which may lead to danger. Because it is difficult to manage a great number of
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, and sometimes it will cause stampede accidents. To sum up, I partly agree that
schools
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 need to do more entertaining. Despite excessive
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 having some disadvantages,
schools
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 can implement some regulations and protective measures, and limit the time of
entertainment
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.
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