Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, our planet is heavily affected by human activities. A small portion of the world believes that it is not possible to prevent nature from destroying but others think , there are some possibilities to overcome it. In

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essay , I will discuss both views and will give my impression of them. First of all , a small group argue that protecting our environment from damage is unimaginable

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overusing it. In

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,era people are running to make their life better and they are misusing nature.

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, people cut a number of trees daily

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good furniture but they are not replanting them as they believe that ,

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the responsibility of others.

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, people say they are not getting enough time to recover it .

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, others think definitely it is possible to prevent

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harm to

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through some methods.

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, it is essential to give some awareness classes to the public.

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can help to make them understand the needs of nature and what are the consequences if it is not protected.

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, governments and other authorities should encourage the public by introducing good methods to save the earth .

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, the Government of Kerala started a new system called 'My

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' in all schools, where children are gifted a plant every year ,

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have to plant and maintain it throughout their lifetime. Children had to maintain a dairy for the whole year, some it

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them more concerned about the plant and

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them to know its value. In conclusion, I believe that it is essential to save our earth for our future from all manmade harm by giving awareness classes to society and making them understand the

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if it is not sheltered .

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Address the topic more comprehensively, providing a more balanced discussion of both views. Use clear and specific examples to support your ideas.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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4 paragraphs

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