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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

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Different types of study methods are important for the evolution of one's self. Some people argue that studying with a group of
students
 has a greater impact on the learning process than studying individually online. In my opinion, I agree that physical learning interaction in classrooms is more beneficial than
an
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online homeschooling. learning and being present in classrooms improves emotional, physical and phycological development. Interacting with a group of people and participating in different class discussions, are highly suggested to improve social skills. These skills are crucial to preparing
students
 to face real-life challenges in the future.
For example
, working in teams works and dealing with different mentalities equip learners to carry
this
 skill in any working environment.
Also
, attending classes physically enhances body motion and movements and helps with brain intellectual and critical thinking. During my student life, I strongly believe that
this
 method has shaped me into the person I have become now.
Moreover
, Studying online has
also
 some advantages but the downside outweighs its benefits.
This
 method could be used as a great teaching tool in pandemics and global crises, where
students
 cannot attend schools and universities.
However
,
on the other hand
as a result
 of
this
, pupils can become anti-social and alienated from the outside world. Another benefit is in case of any emergency a teacher can give the class or lectures online
instead
 of dismissing the lesson completely.
Also
, lessons given online can be saved for
students
 to revisit
them
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at any needed time. As discussed studying online could be a life safer in certain situations. In conclusion, any physical experience plays a vital role in a student's growth in many ways. These experiences can not be compensated in an online classroom as debating and being part of a group help
students
 to progress at a short time pace.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical interaction
  • Fosters
  • Communication skills
  • Structured environment
  • Discipline
  • Time management
  • Immediate feedback
  • Clarification
  • Motivate
  • Competitive environment
  • Achievement
  • Accommodate
  • Group discussions
  • Experiments
  • Presentations
  • Flexibility
  • Convenience
  • Commitments
  • Remote areas
  • Digital platforms
  • Interactive simulations
  • Social anxiety
  • Participate
  • Engage
  • Diverse learning paces
  • Learning styles
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