Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Large corporations nowadays use sporting events as a way to popularize their

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become a hot topic for arguing, with many believing that

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trend affects

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negatively. I personally believe that there are several sides to discuss between these two perspectives On the one hand, it may bring some positive sides by booking

athletes

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to promote the sponsor’s

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.

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, the customers will consume more of the

products

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when they see the benefits of the

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on the television, or on some

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while going outside.

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, if those

athletes

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have fans,

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their supporters will buy the

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to level up their idol’s careers.

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, sportspeople will generate substantial revenue for their lives. They can earn money from advertising as it is their left-handed job, and

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they do not need to care about

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financial problems and focus on the games.

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, there are certain aspects which make people think

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action has a negative impact on sports.

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with, there will be a lack of

athletes

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because most of them will participate in showbiz by advertising or acting in front of the cameras.

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, they will have less time to practice which leads to the loss of strength, and they cannot be in competition anymore.

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but not least, the way sportspeople promote the

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will somehow result in increasing child obesity.

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, when

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is

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main sponsor for one competition, they can make a menu with stickers of

athletes

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as a gift.

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being impressionable, children are more likely to crave junk food when seeing advertisements

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their idols. In conclusion, while I believe that using sports events as a promotion platform can be beneficial, the organizers and the sportsmen should be aware of the impact of the

products

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they advertise.