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Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Large corporations nowadays use sporting events as a way to popularize their
products
 which
has
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 become a hot topic for arguing, with many believing that
this
 trend affects
industry
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the industry
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 negatively. I personally believe that there are several sides to discuss between these two perspectives On the one hand, it may bring some positive sides by booking
athletes
 to promote the sponsor’s
products
.
Firstly
, the customers will consume more of the
products
 when they see the benefits of the
products
 on the television, or on some
sign boards
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 while going outside.
Moreover
, if those
athletes
 have fans,
then
 their supporters will buy the
products
 to level up their idol’s careers.
Secondly
, sportspeople will generate substantial revenue for their lives. They can earn money from advertising as it is their left-handed job, and
also
 they do not need to care about
the
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 financial problems and focus on the games.
However
, there are certain aspects which make people think
this
 action has a negative impact on sports.
To begin
 with, there will be a lack of
athletes
 because most of them will participate in showbiz by advertising or acting in front of the cameras.
As a result
, they will have less time to practice which leads to the loss of strength, and they cannot be in competition anymore.
Last
 but not least, the way sportspeople promote the
products
 will somehow result in increasing child obesity.
For example
, when
McDonald
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McDonald's
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 is
a
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the
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 main sponsor for one competition, they can make a menu with stickers of
athletes
 as a gift.
Consequently
, because
of
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being impressionable, children are more likely to crave junk food when seeing advertisements
of
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for
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 their idols. In conclusion, while I believe that using sports events as a promotion platform can be beneficial, the organizers and the sportsmen should be aware of the impact of the
products
 they advertise.
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