The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram depicts the working principle of the energy-wave machine.

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, based on the location options of

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device, we can observe discrepancies in terms of its capacity and cost.

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with, when water enters installed construction, the level of elevation occurs.

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liquid rises towards the turbine by airflow it circulates lower turbines which

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generator. After that, water reaches the upper part of the turbine and changes its direction. In order to maintain the circulation of the whole turbine, there in the machine's design free spaces for airflows from above placed opposite the direction of the water flow. Wave energy machines have criteria for their productivity. When the construction process occurs in areas with low waves, the output of

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device will be less than the appliance planned designed for the large wave part of the sea.

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, the financial aspect of a machine's installation based on its location has the same tendency as its output.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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