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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that old residents of different communities have increased incredibly which may affect the cost of the
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 in the country. But, as we all know that in all the countries there are lots of people who live below the poverty line and as
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 they cannot afford to pay the medical charges. So that's why I fully disagree with
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 notion that the public has to pay themself for their
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. The
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 and foremost reason is that according to the statistical data more than sixty per cent of the population in the world live below the poverty line
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 they cannot able to manage their day-to-day household
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. How they can afford the
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 of medical facilities?
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 to that, hospitals nowadays charge exorbitant prices for their services, which is totally unfavourable for the general public and the economy. Moving to the
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, definitely it will increase the inflation rate in the economy and the Government will lose control of the
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. In that case, people who are living under the poverty line will not get the proper treatments for their illness which may have detrimental effects on the world's
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. For ,example spreading of COVID-19 and Malaria. it is necessary to take valuable steps to get rid of problems like health
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 by expanding the public
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. In conclusion, if the Government do not want any other scenario like COVID-19, they should take responsibility for paying all the
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 for the nation's population.
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