People in the limelight have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behavior.            To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that famous individuals who are able to influence the community are responsible for exemplifying  themselves through decent

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. I totally agree with the claim regarding responsibility even though it may deleteriously affect

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private lives

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not being able to be themselves as it can be compromised for the

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society. Opposers may argue that, by having to set a model in the public eye, influencers will be deprived of their privacy,

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being imposed of an invisible insecurity about themselves. It is,

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, vital to acknowledge that, if these individuals can conduct whatever act they want, they will detrimentally impact their followers, especially children who are most susceptible to bad habits.

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, quintessential

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are the propellers that push

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society forward and acquire higher

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,

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, these people are the most likely to accomplish

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by showing good

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when confronting the public. Advocates of non-responsible celebrities may

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propose that in able to attain good reviews from the public, famous people may have to impersonate a false identity in which they can no longer be themselves, thereby losing their true

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afterwards.

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, whether these individuals have to portray another character is entirely dependent upon themselves. If they inherently possess good

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, it is redundant for

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,

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if they do not, they can attempt to improve themselves,

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being a better human being.

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, a number of

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have found themselves improving as

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result of realizing how influential they are to their viewers and the

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for accountability. In conclusion, incurring

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a responsibility means that a private part of their life will no longer

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, and there is a risk for dissociative identity disorder,

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, given that positive ramifications take precedence over detrimental

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as it provides the community with greater benefits, I strongly agree that

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should be applied to all influencers.