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Mobile phone has become one of the most important survival kits in our everyday life. Some people think that such technology has brought people to a new level of convenience. Do you agree with the statement? What do you think would be like if there were no such innovation as mobile phone.

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Communication
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 vital part of life. Of course,
mobile
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phone
 plays a crucial role to connect
population
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in
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every day and offers
the
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 advanced layer of convenience. I agree with
this
 view.
To begin
 with, technology easing the world of
communication
 is
mobile
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a mobile
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phone
. It puts humanity in a better position to connect with one another despite living in different places.
Thus
,
this
 facility has become what ordinary people cannot lack.
In addition
 to
this
, the device has
a great deal of
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a lot of
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 functions to cater to
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specific needs. A good illustration of
this
 is
such
 certain features as video call while calling, the presence of numerous applications offer
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ease of life. Without
mobile
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a mobile
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phone
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phones
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, it leads to
collapse
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the collapse
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 of
communication
. As
population
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the population
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 pose certain problems
that
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 inconvenience may bring some difficulties to delivering messages. Society
of
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 which no existence of cell
phone
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phones
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 is found may put humanity in more
troubles
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trouble
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 to be attributed. Worse, communicating without the facility is a time-consuming task which can encounter stopping the growth of
world
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the world
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. To conclude,
such
innovation
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an innovation
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called
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as called
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mobile
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the mobile
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phone
 takes
communication
 to heights.
This
 offers any connection more convenient and easier. If it disappears from the world,
communication
 will die out.
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