You recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: * Say what the participant liked about the hotel. * Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel. * Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in futures.
Dear Sir,
I, Kuljeet Kaur, an employee of XYZ company organized an all-day meeting on the 24th of August in the hotel. I am writing to you to bring into your eyes the feedback shared by the participants.
Firstly
, each one is very happy with the amenities provided in the restaurant, especially, the meal served. Apart from it, they also
like the interior decoration of the auditorium. Furthermore
, many of them also
praise the efforts of the staff.
However
, one thing that they complained about is the quantity of food. Moreover
, a few employees also
write that they were served uncooked rice. Thus
, due to the above-mentioned problem, they were unhappy about the food.
Hence
, it would be really commendable if you could please take care of these problems in order to serve the customers in a better way. I also
suggest you reduce the size of the buffet so that food is not wasted.
Hope you will pay attention to it.
Yours Faithfully,
Kuljeet Kaur.Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite