many companies are developing electronic books.some people think these books will replace paper books in the future.to what extend do you agree?

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In recent years, giant tech companies have been producing cutting_ edge devices for offering electronic
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, the use of
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books
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has been constantly decreasing over the
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decade. Technophiles believe that in the future
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books
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will be completely substituted with ebooks. In my
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this
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is an inevitable future. It is my view that in the coming years with enhancements in technology, the
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generation will not have access
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desire to
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books
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. Since ebook reader gadgets are capable of restoring thousands of
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in a portable device, people are able to read their favourites in any situation.
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, when I was a student in medical school, I needed several textbooks at the same time while I was examining my patients. Textbooks of pharmacology, aid
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of physical exams, and several other
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, were in need simultaneously. It was impossible for me to carry them in the hospital but I could easily reach for my tablet and have instant access to a digital version of these
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, some people claim that holding a
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book in one's hand gives them a different lovely sense
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incomparable to digital
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. They firmly insist that because of
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joyful experience, people will never give up
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books
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.
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, I do not find
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argument convincing because having a positive feeling about traditional
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comes from good old memories. In fact, it is only the nostalgia that makes
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experience preferable compared
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reading an ebook. That said, the
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generation will not have
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memories.
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, they definitely will not perceive any good Feelings
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reading a
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book. In conclusion, I completely agree with those who believe
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books
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will fade in the future because their undefeatable rivals, e-
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, are far more accessible.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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