You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell: What did you do for the company during the years you worked there What changes you would like to recommend What training you require
Dear Mr Singh,
I am writing today with
regards
to my scheduled meeting tomorrow with you Fix the agreement mistake
regard
at
the conference room. Change preposition
in
Although
the schedule is for business development, here I want to discuss several other issues as well which I will be discussing tomorrow.
Since it had been approximately 7 years of my service with this
organisation, I feel overwhelmed with
the wonderful opportunity that I had received in Change preposition
by
this
firm. As being
a finance manager I took the finance and accounts department to Unnecessary verb
apply
the
phenomenal heights as the profit of the company at the time of my joining was just $250 million Correct article usage
apply
however
, it had Add the comma(s)
,however
been
increased to $570 million till Unnecessary verb
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last
year. Though it was a
teamwork, being in charge of the said department, I feel honoured about it.
Well, I would like to suggest some alterations in the finance department. Particularly, the computers are becoming obsolete as they are approximately 10 years old, Remove the article
apply
besides
this
, the windows in all these devices are outdated and as per engineers recommendation
these devices need a replacement. So I recommend the replacement of these gadgets for the benefit of the whole organization.
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,recommendation
Moreover
, since I have been working for the last
7 years, I have not been provided with the
training in the Management field. As I Correct article usage
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woul
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would
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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