You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell: What did you do for the company during the years you worked there What changes you would like to recommend What training you require

Dear Mr Singh, I am writing today with regard to my scheduled meeting tomorrow with you in the conference room.
Although
the schedule is for business development, here I want to discuss several other issues as well which I will be discussing tomorrow. Since it had been approximately 7 years of my service with
this
organisation, I feel overwhelmed by the wonderful opportunity that I had received in
this
firm. Being a finance manager, I took the finance and accounts department to phenomenal heights as the profit of the company at the time of my joining was just $250 million,
however
, it had increased to $570 million by
last
year. Though it was teamwork, being in charge of the said department, I feel honoured about it. Well, I would like to suggest some alterations in the finance department. Particularly, the computers are becoming obsolete as they are approximately 10 years old,
besides
this
, the windows in all these devices are outdated and as per engineers recommendation, these devices need a replacement. So I recommend the replacement of these gadgets for the benefit of the whole organization.
Moreover
, since I have been working for the
last
7 years, I have not been provided with training in the Management field. As I would like to expand my skills ,
hence
you are requested to kindly arrange me with the same. So that I could help the organisation to flourish more. Hope to hear a positive response. Yours sincerely, Katherine.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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