A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

It is universally accepted that

children

’s early education plays a most essential role in their growth. Under

such

consensus, there are individuals who assume that it is the outer environment, superior to the

home

, that has a greater influence on their growth.

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, I partly agree with

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statement. I believe both factors

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domestic and outside have their strong effect and it is over-generalized to say which one outweighs the other.

To begin

with, it is reasonable to say the factors outside the

home

have definite significance when it comes to

children

’s development,

such

as the schools, and public places. To be specific, most parents send their son or daughter to school for formal education, which is more organized and effective. During

this

process,

children

will absorb what their teachers impart, including knowledge and moral principles, or they will communicate with other classmates about homework or daily

life

, etc.

Therefore

, their personality and quality will form simultaneously, setting a concrete basis

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their growth.

In addition

, other situations like strangers’ behaviour in the tube or in shopping malls, may have distinctive influences on youngsters.

However

, we should not place domestic factors as an inferior aspect of

children

’s growing up. The

home

is where a child is born and raised, which is most vital since

children

spend much amount of time at

home

and parents are their

first

teachers, showing kids manners and approaches in dealing with different issues in their

life

, which will exert effects directly on their offspring. Parents must be there and behave themselves,

otherwise

younger generation will see and hear,

then

become negative, and even commit a crime, making

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chaos in society, which is obviously detrimental. On top of

this

, a family’s atmosphere is very much contributing to their personality forming. If it is harmonious,

children

are evident to be taken good care of,

thus

they can be more confident and optimistic, marching onto their future with a positive outlook and leading a happy

life

. Or else, there will always be an emotional deficit, and

life

would be hard for them until they cure themselves with a

life

-long period. Given all the points above, I consider that we value both aspects at

home

and outside, to make

children

have complete character. The whole society should focus on education more in case of neglecting their development.