A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?

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’s early education plays a most essential role in their growth. Under

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consensus, there are individuals who assume that it is the outer environment, superior to the

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, that has a greater influence on their growth.

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statement. I believe both factors

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domestic and outside have their strong effect and it is over-generalized to say which one outweighs the other.

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with, it is reasonable to say the factors outside the

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have definite significance when it comes to

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’s development,

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as the schools, and public places. To be specific, most parents send their son or daughter to school for formal education, which is more organized and effective. During

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process,

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will absorb what their teachers impart, including knowledge and moral principles, or they will communicate with other classmates about homework or daily

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, etc.

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, their personality and quality will form simultaneously, setting a concrete basis

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their growth.

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, other situations like strangers’ behaviour in the tube or in shopping malls, may have distinctive influences on youngsters.

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, we should not place domestic factors as an inferior aspect of

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’s growing up. The

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is where a child is born and raised, which is most vital since

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spend much amount of time at

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and parents are their

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teachers, showing kids manners and approaches in dealing with different issues in their

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, which will exert effects directly on their offspring. Parents must be there and behave themselves,

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younger generation will see and hear,

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become negative, and even commit a crime, making

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chaos in society, which is obviously detrimental. On top of

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, a family’s atmosphere is very much contributing to their personality forming. If it is harmonious,

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are evident to be taken good care of,

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they can be more confident and optimistic, marching onto their future with a positive outlook and leading a happy

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. Or else, there will always be an emotional deficit, and

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would be hard for them until they cure themselves with a

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-long period. Given all the points above, I consider that we value both aspects at

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and outside, to make

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have complete character. The whole society should focus on education more in case of neglecting their development.