The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think that it is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believed that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days obesity diseases are becoming increasingly in the nations ,especially among
children
. Some people consider that raising a number of overweight
children
is based on
parents
' inattention , while others argue against that contention. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think that
parents
who are not carrying for their
children
are the main blame for
such
phenomenon. in the succeeding paragraphs, I intend to delve into the rationale for both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my viewpoint.
First
of all, I believe that
parents
are the main ones responsible for not monitoring their
children
’s health is reasonable. the main reason given to support
this
claim is that
parents
work a long time and they are seeking to fast solutions to feed their
children
.
For instance
, when
parents
have shift night they buy fast
food
for them rather than making a natural cooked meal,
Thus
, the
children
will suffer from a lot of diseases and lose vitamins from their body.
Moreover
,
children
at
this
sensitive age need much monitoring in their choices of
food
.
in other words
, the
children
do not much care about the value of the
food
and do not have the knowledge about which kind of
food
should eat. To illustrate, if make the
children
choose between an egg or a small piece of cake to eat for breakfast they will decide to eat the latest option. In conclusion, it is evident that
parents
are to blame for not looking after their
children
’s health.
parents
must ensure steps are taken to prevent
this
phenomenon from deteriorating future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overweight
  • developed countries
  • fast food outlets
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • calories
  • fat
  • sugar
  • weight gain
  • convenience
  • affordability
  • nutrition
  • healthy eating habits
  • socioeconomic status
  • access to
  • government policies
  • regulations
  • advertising restrictions
  • holistic approach
  • intervention
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