Some people think that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sport starts are paid too much. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Which other type of job should be highly paid?

There has been a controversy about whether

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,

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as film stars, are paid too much. I agree with

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argument, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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, they serve as a negative example for the younger generation. It's expected that a well-paid

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always needs high education and excellent abilities; high education is of the utmost importance in the

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market because it can examine your skills to a large extent.

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, in order to attain diplomas,

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have to study arduously and the process can be challenging.

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, the advent of

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makes

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's efforts pointless because they break the regular role that getting a lucrative

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doesn't need diplomas anymore. At

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point, the younger generation might be affected and start disdaining diplomas.

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, causing dissatisfaction among the general public. It's commonplace that every occupation has its

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limit;

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who engage in

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can't have a salary beyond

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limit.

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, the

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of celebrities has become invisible these years;

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, they are scared to let

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know their real

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. At

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point, it's bound to happen that there will be an unsatisfactory emotion among the general public if the

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of celebrities is revealed.

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,

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a situation might damage the harmony of society as well because there might be some protests against

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on account of their astounding wages.

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, there are occupations which are deserved to be paid well.

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, doctors and scientists. As we know, the process of becoming a doctor is difficult and arduous, and due to the importance of doctors, they are always asked to work overtime.

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, these respectful jobs are deserved to be paid well to match their contributions. In conclusion, I believe

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shouldn't be paid

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high and there are other occupations that should be paid highly.