Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent you agree?
Groups of
people
around the world
think social media
apps and websites such
as Instagram and Facebook had an abysmal result on communities and humans individually. Although
there are many positive and negative impacts while
using social media
and I will talk about them in this
essay. On the one hand, when you spend too much of your time
on these types of apps only because you are bored, your time
has been used uselessly. Thus
, while
you spending your time
there, lots of people
around the world
are communicating in person and increasing their social skills which you do not. For example
, TikTok is a social networking app for people
around the world
to share their videos there
which is not helpful for us to Rephrase
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because while
we spend our time
in an unhelpful way also
our communication skills will not improve. Rephrase
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Hence
, applications like this
are always lurking to hunt
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time
and attention. On the other hand
, applications such
as Facebook helped
us to share our ideas with Wrong verb form
help
people
around the world
. However
, users can be aware of other humans’ news and their experience
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experiences
For instance
, in applications such
as Pinterest, artists around the world
can share their artworks and they can find new ideas there which is very helpful. Therefore
, social media
and networks are positive tools if you use
them correctly. In conclusion, each person and group of people
should be aware of the negative impact can
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media
apps do
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life
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lives
use
them in a luminary way. After thoroughly analyzing this
subject, I predict, that our next generation will use
more of these technologies in a better way than we do.Submitted by jaberi.mahyar on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion