A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - give details of the course you took at the university - explain why you recommend the university - give some advice about how to apply Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear _________,

Dear Jane, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am glad that you have completed all the required courses in
the
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high school. I am writing to share
you
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some advice on the pre-med
course
at Queen’s
University
. I took the pre-med
course
at
university
last
year.
This
course
includes several different subjects, including biology, organic chemistry, physics, Latin and medical English. The
course
is highly demanding,
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involves lectures, seminars and group assignments. You are
also
required to attend laboratory sessions for biology and organic chemistry. Tutors will arrange for oral tests for Latin and medical English. I highly recommend that you could apply for the pre-med
course
at
the
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Queen’s
University
. The curriculum is well-organized,
tutors
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are knowledgeable and extremely helpful. There is
also
opportunity
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to get an
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internship
intership
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internship
at the
university
research
center
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. Most graduates from
this
course
have been enrolled in
the
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medical school. With regard to the application, I suggest that you could prepare
for
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the
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personal statement and letter of recommendation. You could
also
find some useful tips for the interview online. I hope to
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from you very soon. I wish you good luck
in
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the application. Best regards, Ada
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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