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Some people consider that school education should be concentrated on academic subjects, which would be helpful for their future careers, and subjects like music and sport are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are many people who think that some educational
subjects
such
 as physical education and music are don’t needed at school and pupils should learn only useful branches of
study
. I oppose the view and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. According to me, I would like to say that if we will
study
 only the academic lessons that are necessary for the future, it seems to be that people's views will grow narrower. There will be learned only equations, formulas and glossaries that are boring, on top of that it is a very subjective opinion , and not everyone likes to
study
 only academies in public schools for 10-11 years. Because , as it has been for a long time, school is a place where children should choose a profession that they like, studying different
subjects
 and having tried yourself in different areas. Apart from that, the
subjects
such
 as music, and physical education are kind of entertaining and useful for us stuffs.
For example
, sports help keeps our body in a normal tone and prevent diseases.
Besides
 art and drawing lessons will help us relax and let our imagination run wild. I guess when students want to rest from these academies,
subjects
 like music , and art are very convenient for
this
 purpose To draw a conclusion, looking at the different interests of students and taking into account the long-standing principles of the school, I think that children should
study
 not only academic
subjects
 but
also
 other classes.
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