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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organization. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?

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With the development of
economy
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, more and more
people
 take part in
individual
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the individual
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operation
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operations
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 and start their own businesses. In my opinion, working
one’s
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for one’s
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 own
business
 has pros and cons, but
advantages
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the advantages
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 for
people
 working for their own
business
 don’t outweigh the disadvantages. As far as I can see,
people
 nowadays are losing patience and becoming more impetuous.
Hence
,they excessively focus on the advantages of working for their own
business
.
However
, the disadvantages of working alone are more than the advantages. Let me tell you about a true experience myself. I was young and naive, losing myself in the legends of a tiny number of
people
 who work their own
business
, and believing that I would succeed.
However
, things changed when I quit my job. The most serious problem is ——I can’t even have a way to pay my bills if I failed. Though I kept on, the situation got worse. Growing outcomes, lower enthusiasm, and in the end, my deposit is all spent, I had to use my credit card to pay for my mills. I
finally
 found
this
 decision is actually Irrational. I tell myself it’s not too late to mend the dead sheep. Again, I found a job in a company, now I live better than ever before. All in all, because of a series of disadvantages and my own experience, I think working for a company or organization is more visible than working on their own
business
.
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