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Some people believe that teaching music in schools is vital, while others think it is unnecessary (opinion)

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A number of the public think that
music
 should learn in school , while others do not stay with
this
 statement ,
in addition
, in my point of view it is not too necessary to learn it .
First
 of all , they have a plethora of subject , which is important for them as science, mathematics and other subjects , those only will helpful for them in the future ,
for example
 , due to the advanced technology , science is more important than other subjects ,
as a result
 , which is the only book , they give technical knowledge as well as social.
Moreover
 ,
music
 is an art ,
therefore
 everyone is not able to learn it ,
in addition
 , most children have no interest in
this
 subject ,
for example
 , 30 out of 67 students choose a physical training program rather than others.
Furthermore
 , in his field no prestigious opportunities, while another side , they can get a huge range of options to select side their career,
such
 as , after graduation , they can join any kind of company, which they want ,
therefore
 they feel internal satisfaction to join it.
On the other hand
 , some children have a hobby
to
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of
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 becoming a musician ,
therefore
 it should be there , due to the passion , many schools arranged it for them ,
for instance
 , numerous schools organized
music
 competition , where they learn
music
 the whole year in the campus and
last
 doing a competition between them.
Secondly
 ,
music
 as art we should respect it and take it as a subject in school, there it encourages children to join the field,
such
 as the competition market , many schools include it. In conclusion , I believe that everyone is not interested in it but it is becoming for those, who are interested in
music
 and it is beneficial for them.
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