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In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

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In most
of
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the
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countries,
people
 have an interest in western cultures. Because of globalization,
people
 tend to try new styles of clothing
instead
 of their own orthodox ones.
This
 essay discusses why I strongly consider
this
as
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a negative development. 
First
 of all, when
people
 try to copy the other's
culture
 and way of dressing, eating, and living,
People
 are forgetting their history, traditions, and
culture
. In
India
, men commonly wear a shirt and pants;
on the other hand
, women wear
a
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saree. There are many reasons behind every dressing method. Because
India
 has a tropical climate, most parts of
India
 have a humid climate. Our ancestors used to wear cotton clothes because
that is
 the perfect dress for
India
's climate. But
people
 have the wrong assumption about western clothing.
People
 in western countries,
for example
, wear coat suits on regular occasions because they need
a
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warm cloth to protect themselves from the cold weather.
However
, some
people
 do not understand
this
, and they just follow the trend.
Furthermore
,
people
 lose their identity as they try to fit into an irrelevant
culture
.It is not good for the community because once they stop bothering about their
culture
, they will soon forget their own mother tongue. To summarise
this
 topic, as I mentioned earlier, there is always a negative development when
people
 neglect their own ways of living.
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