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Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #anyone #art #poetry #music #person #abilities
There is no doubt that
art
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 today's world. Some people might think - while others think. My opinion is that -.
First
 of all, It is obvious that there are numerous artists who were born with no special talent.
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,
art
 shouldn't be rated or judged, as it is
one
 of
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 that human enjoys their life with. To put it another way, everyone has
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 opinion on
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 same
art
 piece. It is different from a math problem that has only
one
 answer.
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, a month ago, my friend and I visited a place called 'MoMA', which is a world-class
art
 gallery in New York. We were literally overwhelmed by all the
art
 pieces that were there.
However
, there was something that I couldn't understand or get inspired
from
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. There was a painting that has
one
 dot with white background. While I was thinking that I could do it
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easily
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 as well, a stranger stopped
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in front
infront
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 of it and started telling people that the painting is amazing. It turned out that it was a piece from
one
 of the famous artists in the world who was known as god talented.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal form of expression
  • inherent aspect
  • specialized skills
  • innate talent
  • specialized training
  • evokes deep emotions
  • resonates
  • folk art
  • street art
  • digital media
  • traditional institutions
  • formal education
  • groundbreaking contributions
  • rigorous training
  • profound art
  • inclusive activity
  • meaningful work
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