Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Yearly, a lot of small and local
businesses
will close in different neighbourhoods because they can not compete against international and big companies. In Use synonyms
this
essay, you will see two types of problems which Linking Words
this
behaviour causes to the small Linking Words
shops
and some solutions for them.
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To begin
with, local Linking Words
people
of Use synonyms
area
Correct article usage
the area
wants
sometimes Verb problem
apply
to
use their own local and Fix the infinitive
apply
city
Use synonyms
product
which they can find Fix the agreement mistake
products
them
in small stores by their own Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
but, when branch supermarkets Use synonyms
will
come, they can not sell whatever they want because they have their Verb problem
apply
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products
to sell not the local one. Correct word choice
own products
Also
, Linking Words
this
will destroy small market Linking Words
businesses
and unfortunately, the owners should leave that Use synonyms
city
. Use synonyms
For example
, when Walmart appears in small cities, local Linking Words
people
will Use synonyms
get
shocked, because Walmart has better deals and benefits for their customers Verb problem
be
instead
of local Linking Words
shops
, Use synonyms
as a result
, owners of small Linking Words
businesses
will leave that Use synonyms
city
and Use synonyms
people
who live there can not find their local Use synonyms
products
anymore.
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However
, the solution for the first problem is simple, as the company select the manager of that new branch from that Linking Words
city
, he can add some local food and Use synonyms
products
to the store so that Use synonyms
people
can have both their local Use synonyms
products
and the normal one. Use synonyms
In addition
, for the other problem, Linking Words
government
and leaders of those small cities can help local Correct article usage
the government
businesses
and small supermarkets to stay alive and compete with huge supermarkets which helps Use synonyms
that
Correct determiner usage
the
city
Use synonyms
people
to get interested Use synonyms
to have
their Change preposition
in having
Use synonyms
shops
. Correct word choice
own shops
For instance
, the government can take fewer taxes and electricity bills from small Linking Words
shops
which helps them not worry about Use synonyms
such
things.
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To conclude
, international and big markets can not have local Linking Words
products
if their manager does not be aware of those local Use synonyms
products
and for small Use synonyms
shops
is impossible to stay against huge companies which they have to close and leave but, if the manager of those Use synonyms
shops
were from that Use synonyms
city
, he can have a local product in the store and government with only small financial support can keep the small Use synonyms
businesses
alive.Use synonyms
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