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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.

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Every country in the world has its own learning style, causing many types of
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education
system
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systems
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. But some
education
 systems do not work at all. To illustrate
this
further
, we all know that developed countries’ governments educate their population better than lower countries’ governments.
That is
 because they use a different path to educate their people. In some states, especially in the far
eastern
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, people want issues to initiate their
education
 at age of four, starting with nursery
school
 as the very
first
 step of learning. After nursery
school
, the formal
education
 will begin with
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primary
school
 through middle and high till the
children
 graduate. Those people are thinking that their
children
 could learn more than other
children
. And they
also
 think that they would be convenient in universities.
In contrast
, some countries choose to start formal
education
 when the student is seven or eight years old. Before they begin their formal
education
,
children
 will stay with their family, learning from real experience and other skills like social and
education
.
That is
 the reason why they can do well when studying at an institution. In my opinion, I think
children
 should begin formal learning at the age of seven. Learning by themselves is an initiation of their knowledge.
Moreover
, they can learn things they like or dislike. For some countries that begin formal
education
 at four years old,
that is
 too early for the
children
 to start academic learning. Learning from their experience is the better way for them. Despite knowing that, some parents choose to send their issues to
school
, noticing that their
children
 have to compete with others for a better place in society. In conclusion, I do agree with the
education
 system that begins formal
education
 at the age of seven.
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