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Many museum across the world charge an entry fee from all visitors. Some people agree that entry to the museum should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree???

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Museums
 are very important because of the wide array of historical items that they preserve and offer for their visitors, and I agree with the statement that entry fees for
museums
 should be free.
Museums
 are very beneficial to the people it shows not just the history of the people but
also
 the culture. A lot of the
museums
 are owned by the government and I firmly believe that they should fund
the
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 maintenance of in
in
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order to keep their vitality and structure alive. Here in the Philippines many
museums
 closed because of lack of maintenance, as I've visited some of
it
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them
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 I can tell that there it is
such
 an amazing experience going to a museum, I saw what
were
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 once thought by
the
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book, and don't
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need
neeed
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need
 to visualize or rely more on the limited illustrations in the books or in the presentation of our professor. To summarize,
Museums
plays
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 a vital role in the world, and having
it
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them
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 for free will
make
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itmake
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.
alot
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lot
a lot
 of
difference
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 not just with normal people but
for
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also
 the students as well.
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