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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
Doctors and engineers are playing
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role
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society. They both directly or indirectly contribute
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 human health and safety. Some groups of people suppose that
such
 professionals should
work
 in the country where they studied before, whereas others argue that
this
 does not really matter. In my opinion, graduated students should be free to
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other nation if they want;
however
,
this
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this
 discussion. It is true that working in
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 country where
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trained
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 does offer some benefits.
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 it will be easier to
work
 with co-workers, who studied the same books and listened to the same lectures as you
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 because they will know what to expect while working with each
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.
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one place may have
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interest
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,
thus
 they will become better partners. In my view,
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 effective strategy would be to
work
 in another country and
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not
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stay in the same place where you studied, as
this
 approach will have more advantages. Residents from
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different countries will have new knowledge, different strong sides and valuable experience to share with their co-workers.
This
 will make these professionals even better. Graduated students will have a chance to know something new about another county and their culture as well.
This
 will develop them as well. To sum up, professionals should be free to
work
 in other countries if they wish, because
this
 approach has a lot of benefits. I would suggest to students to leave the county where he or
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 studied to pursue future developments.
Submitted by Mezun 2023 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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