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What percentage of fossil fuels did the U. K. consume that year ?

#percentage #fuels #k #year
The charts compare the percentage of
energy
resources
 in five categories in 2015 and predictions about 25 years later. Overall, it is clearly observed that the
amount
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 of fossil fuels, wind and nuclear will decrease steadily during the
next
 25 years.
By contrast
, solar
energy
 will rise dramatically. In 2015, the most
energy
 size was associated with fossil fuels at 64% while the amount of other renewable
energy
 was lower at 23%. The figure for
the
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nuclear
resources
 was at 6% whereas, that
of
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 win
resources
 stood at 5%. In 2040, the percentage of solar capacity will see a significant increase of 16%. Other renewable
energy
 will be approximately five times as much as nuclear
energy
. The proportion of fossil fuels, nuclear and other renewable capabilities will decline slightly by 20%, 1% and 20%, respectively. In 2040,
the
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nuclear
resources
 will account for the least amount of
energy
.
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